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Monday, November 23, 2015

Comparative assignment

These texts have quite a few similarities and differences. One is an advertisement for a summer cruise in the 1920’s, with such loft locals as Jamaica, Cuba, Panama, Central America, and Colombia. The other is a news article from the Miami Herald from 2007 regarding the encroachment of developers on the squatting place for Panama’s poor. These texts are linked through their opposing stances on colonialism. One of course, is an encouragement to continue the actions of the oppressor. While the other is a call of injustice against him. These articles are greatly removed in audience, purpose, content, theme, tone, mood, style, and structure, and this essay will examine both of them with regards to these things.
The audience of the advert is the upper middle and upper classes of America in the 1920’s. This is evident through the picture as well as the elevated language, and direct targeting. For example, the title read “Reduced Rates for Summer Cruises”. This is not the manner of speech of the common man at that time. Additionally, the ad directly targets richer audience saying things like “Extra Large staterooms” and “cuisine that is noteworthy for its excellence”, both of these are not concerns for the poorer people, suggesting that the cruise is only for the rich. And finally the people in the photo at the bottom of the ad are all dressed very posh, in the recent fashion, with good quality make. This is purposeful as the upper and middle classes are the ones who can pay for the trip. The “Squatters versus Developers” article is addressed to the modern counter part of the last. This is quite obvious for several reasons. The placement of the article, in the business section of the Miami Herald, is only a concern to businessmen and their families. Immediately, with this knowledge, are out of the scope of the lower class. The article then must concern the middle and upper classes. This has to be the case as only those in the middle and upper classes have the power or the money. The advert itself is almost transferring the prestige of those classes into the idea of going on the trip. The article reads as a call to action, this implies that the reader has the ability to act, again implying that the article is targeted towards the upper and middle classes, they have enough funds and voice to affect change. This leads into the purposes of the texts.
 The purpose of the advert is to, as is common amongst adverts, to sell a product. In other words to persuade the reader to purchase tickets for the cruise. This is clear through the persuasive language used, as well as several common advert techniques. The diction is highly persuasive, saying things like “for no more than your average summer vacation” and “the coolest ships afloat”. This makes the reader associate a cool and cheap summer vacation with the trip, something only the rich could do. In addition to furthering the transfer of the prestige onto the reader. On the whole it is almost an ego stroke for those who will attend. The latter is mentioned as something others say, to gain credibility and recognition. The former is a way to paint the cruises as far better for the same price. Further examples include the use of the Great White Fleet, a famous American fleet during WW1, and the mention of the “extra-large staterooms” and “exceptional cuisine”. These are all examples of ethos. They appeal to the baser parts of humanity, being pride and greed, to make the reader need to appear rich and savvy. The newspaper article is similar in that it is a persuasive piece. But the end result is very different. The article, specifically, attempts to persuade the reader that the developers are doing evil things to the poor and helpless poor of Panama. It does this through emotional appeal, both with regards to the people in particular and their commitment to their home. It does this quite effectively in the very start of the article. It say “Jimenez, a 61-year-old retired banana pruner who earned $1 an hour, did not own the waterfront land.” This appeal is strong as it applies force in our desire to assist the weak. Further enforcing the purpose of the article. And, as a whole, this also ends up being ethos as we all compelled to feel sorry for the poor squatters and their families.
The contents differ greatly. One contains information on a cruise line. Where it goes, when it goes, what to expect from the ship, and a few pictures. The other contain information in the plight of those less fortunate. The themes are also very different. The advert has a positive theme. It says “take a luxurious trip into the untamed Central and South America” attempting to make the reader feel like a doper businessman. While the news article is one of grim determination against an injustice unseen until now. It is a call to action against an evil revealed. “Fight for the rights of those less fortunate” so to speak.
The tone varying greatly from one to the other. The advert is very bright and cheery. It seems to say “We are the ticket to your dream vacation in variety of locals”. This is done through several means. Firstly the diction is very bright. Words like tropics, staterooms, and cuisine are used to paint the princely experience as all the more grand. It depicts a group of doper young men and women all smiling and happy, and provides the invitation to join them on a wonderful cruise, with all of the prestige and power associated with the upper classes, truly the opitimy of the American dream at that time.. And of course the trusty granted by a military title such as the great white fleet. The whole is a rather appealing plea to join in the fun. This creates a mood of whimsy and joy. This is an effective way to sell the product. The news article however is very different. Its tone is one of outrage and sorrow, at what these people have had to endure in the past and in the present. Its emotionally charged phrases are geared much differently than that of the other. Its phraseology is very different, geared towards the pity generated by situations less fortunate than ours. The diction is far less positive, saying things like displace, low income, shacks, and cracks to create the depressed image we see. This creates a sorrowful but determined mood. This serves to insight action from the readers to help the squatters gain equality.
The style and structure of the two texts are very different. In the ad, there are three noteworthy components to the structure. There are two pictures, the main body of text, the bolded titles and relevant information. The pictures are a map of the relevant tropical locations, a good way to remove and make them all the more special. The other is one of young men and women happily living the life. This is an incentive almost, a call to come fulfill your dreams. The bolded and enlarged words give the hasty reader all they need to know to buy the tickets and set sail. The main body merely provides the detailed information for those whose interest are piqued . This is done so that only those who want to go see them. The main body itself uses multiple different lit devices and persuasive techniques. The primary being transferal, glittering generalities, and bandwagon. The transferal comes in as the trip being a symbol of prestige and power. The generalities occur in the uniform mention of the ports as similar despite being of many different backgrounds. And the Bandwagon is shown through the picture of the large group of young men and women. The primary literary device is the ethos appeal throughout. It plays upon the desire we have for companionship and fun, as well as darker things like our pride. It is styled as an advertisement from a newspaper. The other is a news article. Its only structural components are the bolded title and the main body. However, within the body several literary devices and persuasive technique are used. The persuasive technique include source manipulation, testimonial, plain folk, and glittering generalities. The source manipulation is evident form the uniformity of the bias within the quotes and statistics, making the problem and resolution seem very one sided. The testimonial and the plain folk are presented by man and his normal family. This generates pity and creates a bond between the reader and the people on the beach. And the generalities come in a no specific companies are named making them all evil. The primary literary device is again ethos. This time however the ethos is used to evoke pity and rage for those who have been wronged and so well painted. The title again severs to give a brief summary, as well as pique the interest of the reader. While the main body develops the ideas and biases while informing on the issue at hand. The second is styled as a wordy advertisement .
In conclusion, these are very different texts. The only similarities are the purposes, and only to the extent that both are persuasive. The audiences are similar but removed in time. The purpose vary in that one is colonial and one is not. They are styled differently but have a few structural components that are similar. They both use very powerful persuasive techniques, and rely heavily on the use of ethos to push their relative agendas. But the only real link is that of the oppression and freedom of the South American countries like panama and their poor. However, despite their differences, both are very powerful versions of their text types.




Saturday, November 21, 2015

Comparative Texts


A:
The audience of the article are the uninformed masses. This is evident as it does not serve a particular candidate, so it is not a campaign ad, and it is not a scientific paper. Instead it is a form of critical satire without a solution, only complaints.
The purpose of the piece is to persuade. It attempts to use the transfer technique to move the feelings of brutish stupidity to the idea of global warming. And, through that, to discredit the claim that global temperatures are rising.
C:
The content is a picture of two dinosaurs talking about the climate. One is meant to represent congress, and it is saying that we should monitor global temperature. The other dinosaur says that the congress has a brain the size of a walnut.
The theme is global warming is stupid.
T:
The tone of the piece mocking. This is enforced by the words of the normal dinosaur.
The mood of the piece disbelief.  It causes doubt of the evidence for this argument that ha been presented before.
S:
The style of the piece is a cartoon. It has a relatively warped manner of drawing, further adding to the “unreal” claim made by the words. Further, there is no division between the words and the picture, which is common amongst cartoons, especially inside a newspaper. Likely that is where this picture appeared in print.
The structure is relatively straight forward. It is a cartoon with a speech bubble and a dialogue bubble over the dinosaurs.
A:
The audience is the informed reader. To clarify, the information is available to all. However its placement in a very scientific newspaper makes it more geared towards the knowledgeable reader. This is reinforced by the mention of several of NASA’s other projects, with the assumption that the reader already knows of them
The purpose is to inform, and persuade. It mention data and quotes. However it is a biased piece.
C:
The content of the article is a few paragraphs, regarding the station itself, NASA’s aims, and plans for the future. As well as several pictures from the station itself, showing the CO2 levels throughout the world.
The theme of the article is CO2 levels are rising. This is represented through the higher concentration areas as well as the justifications for them. Every area of high concentration is mentioned, and what is occurring there.
T:
The tone of the article is neutral. This is done to make the article seem more credible and less opinionated. And in enforced through the neutral diction and permeation of facts.
The mood of the article trusting. The use of many facts as well as neutral diction and big names make the article seem valid. As a result the reader finds themselves trusting what is said.
S:
It is styled like a news article. With the images at the front and the development and relevant information given below in the paragraphs.
The structure is simple. Images followed by paragraphs abbreviated by um up sentences as headings for each section. With a few cleverly placed links and ads along the margins, some of which deal with clean energy or efficient use of energy.




Tuesday, November 10, 2015

4 corners of Propaganda

It is acceptable for the government to try to shape public opinion through information campaigns is a false statement. It is very much not ok for the government to do so. This is when media and news become uniform propaganda outlets. Now this is not to say government and media do not do so, in fact it is a very prevalent problem. Especially in America. Ever since the attack on the twin towers, America’s views have been uniform. We are goo they are evil, no more. Of course, many of the things that outraged the US public are mutual. Americans wept at the dead soldiers, even though more horrific images of Iraqi civilians were present. The American people solidly believed they were doing the right thing while being consistently being lied to. The only way to know if a news outlet is neutral is if both ideas of a conflict claim it is propaganda for the other side. As Al Jazeera was during that Iraqi war. Now the American people are better educated though this does not make them media literate. At times of course it is a necessity to polarize the public opinion. Such as in times of war. This is not to say it is ok. But unfortunately this lack of diversity occurs in times when it is unnecessary. But to readdress the question at hand governmental information campaigns are too likely to become a propaganda parade for them to be a good things. This is furthered proved through the stories of Jessica Lynch and Pat Tillman. Both of which were manipulated to suit the government. How could they admit that a star had been shot by his own when he volunteered to fight? Or that the captured heroine had gotten herself captured and was then left by the men who captured her.

Saturday, November 7, 2015

Crackpots and Doomsayers

Asia McClain. A key witness in the “Serial” case of Andan Syed. For years she has been silent. Syed was convicted of the murder of Hae Min Lee in 1999. On grounds of newly discovered evidence and misconduct and fraud in the persecution, Judge Martin P. Welch declared that the case would be reopened.
She wrote to the man while he was in prison, saying she had seen him in the library of his high school on the day and at the time the murder was taking place. She was never contacted by his lawyer, and she did not step forward until earlier this year when she signed an affidavit confirming her testimony. Additionally, the method used to determine his location before, some sort of tracking of his podcasts, proved unreliable and inaccurate.
Andan Syed may finally be free after 16 years in prison for a murder he did not commit. This may seem a good thing. However such misconduct in the justice system is deeply concerning. A man was convicted upon at best shady evidence. And who knows how often it happens without the court catching its own mistake. Just remember that when you walk down the street. Cause no one really knows what the people around could have gotten away with in the past.